Daniel Slap-, 34, of Milwaukee manages [recacted]. He is married.
Gee-zeus, just write 'Dan Slap is a bore' why don't you?
They said if anyone submitted an alternate version by Friday morning it would be changed. I sent mine Thursay. I presented two options:
Dan Slap-, 34, of Milwaukee, is a [x] manager and the father of four children age seven and under.
And the more snarky, wise-ass Dan you know and tolerate:
Dan Slap-, 34, of Milwaukee, is a [x] manager and the father of four children age seven and under. A blogger for many years, his wife would like to point out that the time he devotes to his writing 'career' is mainly just an excuse to avoid changing diapers.
Obviously, I'm being a primadonna here. Just as obvious, I'm annoyed. Maybe this was an early draft, and the print version will be updated? Maybe? Do ya think?